third anti smoking ad

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Shom.gupta
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third anti smoking ad

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please tell me how this piece of work is :)
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Please tell me what you feel about this piece of work. It will be very helpful. Thank you!
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akash664
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Bhai... kaisa hai... ok my review.... since you didnt show this in the lab.... or mabye i ignored... :D


the idea a 9, the copy good as well... but ... so you wonder .... but? what the F*** do you mean but .... aree mere baap ... bolne de ne.... but i think you should add a bit of a story to it .... its sounding like too many in the face facts.... getting me.... sum me maar ne saalo (me and you included) ki..... samjha... try kar ... nahi to ... sahi hai.....
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Paromita
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Post by Paromita »

i think you need to make the headlines more STOPPERS...the thought is fine though....keep it up.
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