I am being put through some boring stuff, kindly suggest me

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Wed May 25, 2011 12:27 pm

Wat would you do, if you were in my seat?

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Wed May 25, 2011 12:28 pm

Kindly suggest me how to make it more interesting!

Ek Kanya · Post by **Ek Kanya** » Thu May 26, 2011 1:03 pm

what is the brief? do you want copy help or art?

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Thu May 26, 2011 1:53 pm

You can suggest me on both the copy and visual parts of the ads.

I am a copywriter, but still I was thinking if I can try on a new layout to make it appear different. I have a layout, but I never tried it, being unsure of it. Something like a news paper front page. Have a look at the attachment and let me know your feedback on it.

Priyanka · Post by **Priyanka** » Fri May 27, 2011 6:27 pm

hi dear! can you make it more warm?

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Fri May 27, 2011 6:51 pm

yeah sure Priya

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Sat May 28, 2011 10:23 am

JCSaiKrishna wrote:yeah sure Priya

Uploading the better version.

basant kumar · Post by **basant kumar** » Sun May 29, 2011 10:16 am

nice. the picture doesnt spell grandeur, though...

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Mon May 30, 2011 11:05 am

Oh yeah, but I just wanted to show the demo of layout!

Saumya · Post by **Saumya** » Tue May 31, 2011 9:28 am

fantastic improvement over the original. what I would do is add a wide and beautiful interior shot. that would give the feeling of grandeur.

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Tue May 31, 2011 10:35 am

Thank you Saumya

, I'll try to get the pic you suggested.

Priyanka · Post by **Priyanka** » Sat Jun 11, 2011 10:40 pm

so are you getting a warmer picture?

JCSaiKrishna · Post by **JCSaiKrishna** » Sat Jun 11, 2011 10:45 pm

yeah, I should

santoshsharma · Post by **santoshsharma** » Wed Jun 15, 2011 8:18 am

Jaisaikrishna,

I think you're mixing two thing that doen't go together like oil and water. I agree that first ads look aggressive, shouting and bad in terms of layout and colours. Second option you have done, look better again in terms of layout and colours. Here is my thought, first ads clearly targets at price sensitive buyers, who look maximum value for money. What you have done is of more a luxury apartment ad. These are two different demographic and psychographic costomers and they don't mix. What i read in first ad and can draw some ideas from it: Faster Contruction, Affordability (not cheap), Bricking your Dreams (may be better payment options). The difference is like a buyer from Big Bazzar and Shopper's Stop. Pls correct me if i appear to be too criticle.

Saumya · Post by **Saumya** » Sat Jun 25, 2011 8:56 am

love your detailed well thought out inputs, santosh!

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