Hitachi - Find the Copy too crowded

[Madonna D'souza]

ompany: Hitachi
Advert title(s): Hitachi ACs with Intelligence & Sensibility
Creative Agency (Name, City, Country): Bates 141, New Delhi, India
Work type: Client work
Published: Yes
Date of publication / release: April, 2010

[Madonna D'souza]

for some reason the background and the copy look too crowded
it doesnt come accross as nicely put together
wht say guys?????