Save Trees -- From an estranged Adboy

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rightbrainkid
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Save Trees -- From an estranged Adboy

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The work is few months old. Last year when our HR guys (I am a UI
Designer with an indian S/W company) pushed me to design something to spread the SAVE message, this is what i came up with.
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life_joke
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Post by life_joke »

the price tag should display the price.
after homing in the piece of garment i, usually, try & find the price tag & then i start deciding whether or not to buy it.
never had the luck of knowing the price by looking at the barcode.
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Post by vikram sharma »

kind of complex message.
what are you trying to cuommunicate?
what is your ONE thing to commute?

Urbanisation and its impact on the environment?
if thats the case, you message is not hard hitting enough. dont make its theatrical, try touching a chord somewhere. try to appeal to people's sensibilities, rather than be clever...
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Post by kikikikikiki »

u have a very nice thought/device there but i think u r not expressing it right. u r complicating it.
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Post by shantyarow »

KISS desperately needed here.
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Post by life_joke »

hey shatz,
watt's this KISS thingy, man??!!
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Post by shantyarow »

Keep It Simple Stupid
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simple, stupid?? OR simple stupid as in sinmple is stupid?? sorry for the stupefying query-baaji, but need ans.
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simple, stupid?? OR simple stupid as in simple is stupid?? sorry for the stupefying query-baaji, but need ans.
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THE RICOCHET SERIES - Instalment 2

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here's something to rip, roar or write
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Post by shantyarow »

Yes yes yes...you got it right.

KEEP IT SIMPLE, STUPID with a comma between SIMPLE and STUPID, and no punctuation between KEEP IT and SIMPLE meaning the expression has just one comma, which thereby means that it is not SIMPLE STUPID but SIMPLE, STUPID, which gives it an entirely different meaning and which is what I had intended it to be, but unfortunately, having the propensity to bang out letters on a keyboard faster than a sten gun, I typed SIMPLE STUPID instead of SIMPLE, STUPID.

Phew! So much complexity for something so simple stupid. Sorry, simple, stupid!
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