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patil_santosh
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Need comments for Axe Effect, independance day ad & more

Post by patil_santosh »

Hi everybuddy,,,,,,,,,,,
This all is my personal assignment/ Work.
comments pls.
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Times of India ad
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Independance day ad for camera
Independance day ad for camera
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Anurag
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Post by Anurag »

i like the first and last one. last one with Lord Krishna is really cool. But perhaps you could make it more clever....

For example you show Lord Krishna with Gopis and at the bottom you say "for others, use axe"....meaning God doesn't need axe but you humans need it.

what u think?
patil_santosh
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Post by patil_santosh »

Thanks Anurag.
For Axe Effect, yes I need ad the copy suggested by u which will more meaningful.

Thanks again.
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MissMallu
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Post by MissMallu »

santosh, i like anurag's idea for axe. are u student? i think u should try the young guns....
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Post by patil_santosh »

Yes, Miss Mallu. I am a student & working as a beginner.
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