Need your comments or suggestions......

[shashankp]

Hi!! check this out, its for PSU clients and a mintos ads....going for approval, plz comment, any suggestions.

Thankx....

[moils]

mentos looks good, a different approach being used. BOI is great. MTNL is okay. GOOD WORK, KEEP GOING.

[Paromita]

first one is very much like the ads in that category. creatively i think you could have shown something more difficult but then if we talking to a basic target this one works.

mentos is nice if your idea is that the baby wants attention hence he hid the glasses.

last one....is ok. but i like them the way each ad has been packaged.

[shashankp]

Hi!!
Thankx for the input.....u r right...FOr BOI target aud. r very nomal people, but still, like u said, can give more difficult visal.....so can u suggest any ......would b a great help...as this is about to get approved...

THankx

[camarathe]

Mentos khaake Dimaag ki batti jali yeh samaz mein aaya lekin itni chhoti umra mein chashmaa? Aur iski mummy ne mentos khaane diyaa? There's little gum in it! A good effort though. MTNL IS NICE.

[Prasoon]

i like all except the telecom one. don't u think u could have shown something with a visual more related to phones? i do not know what but u know what i mean?