Toyota Quality Service

[shantyarow]

Done to link F1 to the fastest Toyota service in the world.

[Paramvir]

nice work. you guys shot it also, eh?

layout needs polish though. think we all need to sit back and look at how to make the layout slicker...

[shantyarow]

Yes, we did shoot it. Would like your pointers on how to polish this further. Cheers.

[Paromita]

very cool. very cool. yes, i agree with parambyte, the picture is really beautiful but the style is 90s, you know we used to see in the blackbook. i still like it over all, but this is my comment, i guess because of the red and those small colors on chrome. perhaps just chrome would have looked even brilliant.

[diptanshu]

like the idea and the photography. looks a little dates though

[diptanshu]

* dated i mean.

[diptanshu]

same thing on clean black perhaps with some reflection. also copy and logos look a little scattered.

[Payal]

khush kar diya

way to go boys.

[shantyarow]

Thanks for all your comments guys.
Lots of points to ponder over.
That's the thing with advertising I love...a plethora of comments.
But I guess, finally, it is the individual call of the creative team handling its baby. Anyway, we were happy doing this to an actual brief in actual market conditions. Cheers, Shanty

[cbp]

The idea's alright. It doesn't kill me but i'm not going wtf either. the headline brings it down considerably. "The number one formula for the world's fastest Toyota service'. Please. That's some seriously bad writing. And you are explaining the idea way too much. The parts are arranged to look like a formula one car, ergo you do not need to put 'formula' or 'one' in the line. 'The world's fastest Toyota service' should do it. Cheers.