L'oreal's hair colour and Tabasco

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L'oreal's hair colour and Tabasco

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Here'r two ads-one for L'oreal's & another for Tabasco Sauce. These are unreleased work. Please comment.
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Post by ADivasi »

the first one with Martin Luther King is nice, the second one....is it about coloring your hair black?
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

Yeah, it's a hair colouring product, one that prevents hair showing grey.

And hey ADivasi, our purvaj n' our ultimate bhavishya, thnx for the comment.
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Post by Hasmukh »

adivasi boy, its not Martin Luther king. its nelson mandela. and i did not get either of the ads. kind of difficult to grasp. pray explain please
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mandela or king, it is the same thing man, both were south african presidents under white man's rule.
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

Hasmukh dear,

Sure you understood the hair colour ad. Just a play on the words. People call you Uncle Aunty when your hair greys out.

As for the Tabasco one, Mandela got the Nobel Peace Award. So, the insight's on attempting to make peace-with your taste/tongue once you are Tobasco-ed.
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Post by kikikikikiki »

sorry anurag, but very very very bad ads
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

All right Kiki......
I'll take them to be very^100 bad. Worst ads you've ever seen.

Me a novice. Can you suggest some corrections?
About the Idea.
About the copy.
About the layout.

Always need some pointers from great minds like you.
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Post by Dalbir »

I agree anuraj, let's see some constructive criticism.
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Post by kikikikikiki »

ooops ya sorry i agree and i am sorry about my tone of voice up there
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Post by Pappu »

yes, me think like kikiki, the mandela ad is not very clear. uncle, aunty is not bad.

anurag, u from euro rscg?
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

Hey Kikiki,

No hard feelings. I genuinely trust you guys for all the critisms I receive. I shall always be a learner, and when you hav gurus like you, Dalbir n' the rest, I sure shall learn fast.
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Post by shantyarow »

Not too bad. Could be better.
I didn't quite get the Mandela ad.
And there's too much punning on the L'Oreal ad.
Lemme think how you can do better and get back.
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