Blood Donation

[DADADA]

What do you think?

[pixelfiesta]

Is this published work?
To me, some amount of work has to still go in this...

Art:
Too many styles — Headling is in all caps, subhead in a script starts with lower case. Body in yet an another font.
No logo, no branding or co-branding? Is it a poster for an internal audience.
Are we assuming people know where Blood Transfusion centres are?


Copy:
Shouldnt it be 'Blood. Source of Life' or 'Blood—source of life'
I think it should read something like 'Blood Collection Drive/ Camp'
March ka 'm' is in lower case.
'th' for the dates...
What about the timing? am/ pm?

[Saumya]

good critique, pixelfiesta?

what does the inverted umbrella mean? blood is the umbrella of life?

[pixelfiesta]

I think the thought is that blood is as precious as water.
And just as we would take any means to save water, we should do the same with blood.

Am I right, Dadada?

[pixelfiesta]

good critique, pixelfiesta?

what does the inverted umbrella mean? blood is the umbrella of life?

Saumya, I didnt understand your question!

[DADADA]

Is this published work?
To me, some amount of work has to still go in this...

Art:
Too many styles — Headling is in all caps, subhead in a script starts with lower case. Body in yet an another font.
No logo, no branding or co-branding? Is it a poster for an internal audience.
Are we assuming people know where Blood Transfusion centres are?


Copy:
Shouldnt it be 'Blood. Source of Life' or 'Blood—source of life'
I think it should read something like 'Blood Collection Drive/ Camp'
March ka 'm' is in lower case.
'th' for the dates...
What about the timing? am/ pm?

Thanks for your comment, but it's not published work, it's a personal work, so the informations aren't completed yet, it's just to test the concept, you know this topic is too much exploited, so how do you find this new approach?

[mini15]

i like the way you are testing your idea on an open platform. but what is t that you are trying to say?

an umbrella saves from water? donate blood?

drops of water fill an umbrella (ocean)? similarlydrops of blood will help many?

[vikas]

yeah, I am having a bit of trouble comprehending this one too

[DADADA]

I think the thought is that blood is as precious as water.
And just as we would take any means to save water, we should do the same with blood.

Am I right, Dadada?

Yes you're right and the umbrella inverted does the collect effect

[Paromita]

umbrella as collection makes sense. what doesnt is why umbrella?

its not related to saving lives and health? its not related to blood. its a random metaphor. no?

[encyclomedia]

its raining blood, collect it