Denzel Pereira sends us his work...

[Paramvir]

Denzel Pereira sends us his work, seeking feedback...

[Ek Kanya]

denzel, are you into copy or art? you are working on oyour finish, but also look hard at your ideas. you need to have good sustainable ideas in your work.

[smartsanjoo]

Denzel - to be honest its not even a great try. Look at it yourself and think "Does this excite me?" U have gone literal with the brief. U need to apply some idea. Remember, u need to stand out in the clutter. Apply brother, apply.
By the way, the spelling is 'Trafficking' and not 'Trafficing'. Mind it.

[smartsanjoo]

And oops... 'REGURALY' is not a word in the dictionary. Check. Recheck.

[smartsanjoo]

And, and, and... the word is not 'GOVERMENT' but 'GOVERNMENT OF INDIA'.
U r so very callous. Keep your eyes open, bro.

[Ek Kanya]

great going smartsanjoo. wish i could have articulated it so well as you did.

denzel, you need to wok hard on the IDEAS. execution comes later. please take this as positive feedback. i look forward to seeing you postmore of your work.