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Tear Mate
Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:51 am
by Yeminio
Well... this was unbrieffed, so maybe someone will think that its easy to execute it. Maybe, but to anothers when you have to create anything, it veeeeeeeery hard to choose a product!
the brief said "create any home cleaning product".
--- here we go :S
Client: Tear Mate
Type: Multy cleaning product
Agency: Inexpert Yeminio
Copy: My Brain (parietal zone)
Art Direction: Mouse Compaq Model Nº3+Optical
Genius KB-06XE
My Hand
My Brain
Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 3:59 pm
by Sonya
very nice art, but i don't get the idea. is it the reflection?
Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:33 am
by Yeminio
Yes.
Well, the extremly cleaning.
who would clean his bed and pillows with a multy-cleaning product?
This is really multy cleaning
Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:26 pm
by Priyanka
good good.
Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:14 pm
by leadvertiser
nice thinking yemino. I like the look of it, but i think yo uneed to make the reflections more apparent to get your ideas across quicker. Right now, you are expecting people to study your ads..and people just don't have the time to do that. You may also need a tagline or something. If i didn't get a brief on your ad, i wouldn't know what you were trying to sell.
Good stuff,
Phuong Le (LEE)
Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:53 am
by Yeminio
Well... about the briefing, yes you are right.
But aboout the other one, I think that its good to give some specs because here in Chile everibody knows what is DuocUC... but in the world they don't.
And about glowing... well, maybe some day I'll try to use that piesce more seriously, more glow and more realistic :p
!EYB
Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:02 am
by vikram sharma
good work yeminio, but I agree with leadvertiser. you should add a baseline, a healdine or some explanation for the producct and its benefit. the reflectiosn need to be more precise.
how about taking something you EXPECT to be dirty and making it look clean? that would add some visual surprise?
Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:40 pm
by Yeminio
At the moment Im afraid about text :p
And the thing that makes me fun about the image is that the room is already the style of the clean ones.
I don't like the effect "dirty, now clean!" that is a bit old (tell me if Im wrong)
I know that this is communication, and if the people don't undesrtand the thing isn't working x).
anyway, I don't like it at all, so its okay
SORRYYY I can't avoid to be at the defensive XD
thanks for the critics x)
!EYB
Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:02 pm
by angelusxxi
Hey yeminio just a question, did you creat all the art?, or just found the pics on the internet? and if you did it, in wich program did you made it?
TNX
Nice art direction by the way
Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 9:57 am
by Yeminio
3d max, dude...
you should try it
Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 10:06 am
by Europa
I have seen other work of yours on 3D max. You seem to be a 3D dude. Do you want to be an animator/3D guy or an advertising art director? Just asking, your 3D skills are really nice.
Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 12:50 pm
by Yeminio
Oh, thanks ^^
I'm wishin to be both in the future
we will see what happens
what about you? what you do? or what you want to be?
Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 2:35 pm
by Ek Kanya
Do you do Flash? I know some people who are looking for flash programmers as freelancers.
Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 3:02 pm
by Yeminio
Yes yes, I got one
www.jelou.cl
check it out
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 9:00 am
by Ek Kanya
Ok, PM me your rates and working details