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laal, hari, neeli, peeli nadiya
behti hai jaha..
hai ek kaanch ki duniya
natkhat kisi billi ki aankh si ye duniya..
nanhi si mutthi me sama jaati ye duniya

addhhpakke khwaabon ko lubhati ye duniya..
mere bachpan ki kamaai ..
meri iklauti jaaidaad ye duniya
Koi chheen na le mujhse...
mere ladakpan ki daulat
mitti ke chaadar tale chupa du ye duniya

Kaanch ke kanche... kaanch ki duniya... kyu nahi uss kal jaisi... mere aaj ki duniya

Very sweet. You should consider making a song out of this. Very deep as well. Maybe get a good band to sing it?

bahut khoob!

very well written! kya kehten hain? Irshad! Irshad!

Wah! Wah! Kya Baat Hai!

excellent. who has this much romance anymore

bahut khoob! lovely.

natkhat kisi billi ki aankh si ye duniya..

Wah Wah! Kya Baat Hai!

thank you so much for your kind comments.. all of you have encouraged me write more..
thanks a lot

Rakt ki hi trishna hai jo rakt hi bujhayega
Rakt hi vo mulya hai jo rin rakt ka chukayega

Swabhimaan yadi priya ho, to shudra ya shatriya ho
Karta vo rakt ka balidan hai
Ho shashakt is prakar ki ho vivash vidhi bhi aaj
Badalne par jo bhi uska vidhaan hai

Tan me rakt hai tere to man ko kyu na rangta laal
Vichaar hai mahatvakaanshi to karm kyu na ho vishaal
Tod baandh dhairya ka, tu shaurya ka chunaav kar
Jeevit ho utthhe nirjeev bhi, man par aisa ghaav kar

This one is too right wing. But the earlier was a classic.

Imagine if someone stole thee wonderful poems?

What do you think of the GoaAdfest Fiasco?

Awesome.

Sarthak, stop stealing threads.

D you also write in english?

duniya bas duniya hai
na badaltha hai, na bigadtha
badalthe tho bas log hai
our badaltha hamara nazariya

nanhi munhi pyaari hai
pari si nazuk yeh duniya
pyaar fenko sawanr jaaya
nafrat se choor ho yeh duniya

duniya toh bas duniya hai
na badaltha, na bigadtha