vo purani duniya
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vo purani duniya
laal, hari, neeli, peeli nadiya
behti hai jaha..
hai ek kaanch ki duniya
natkhat kisi billi ki aankh si ye duniya..
nanhi si mutthi me sama jaati ye duniya
addhhpakke khwaabon ko lubhati ye duniya..
mere bachpan ki kamaai ..
meri iklauti jaaidaad ye duniya
Koi chheen na le mujhse...
mere ladakpan ki daulat
mitti ke chaadar tale chupa du ye duniya
Kaanch ke kanche... kaanch ki duniya... kyu nahi uss kal jaisi... mere aaj ki duniya
behti hai jaha..
hai ek kaanch ki duniya
natkhat kisi billi ki aankh si ye duniya..
nanhi si mutthi me sama jaati ye duniya
addhhpakke khwaabon ko lubhati ye duniya..
mere bachpan ki kamaai ..
meri iklauti jaaidaad ye duniya
Koi chheen na le mujhse...
mere ladakpan ki daulat
mitti ke chaadar tale chupa du ye duniya
Kaanch ke kanche... kaanch ki duniya... kyu nahi uss kal jaisi... mere aaj ki duniya
Re: vo purani duniya
Very sweet. You should consider making a song out of this. Very deep as well. Maybe get a good band to sing it?
Kikikikikiki bleach-treated my avatar! Isn't she sweet?
Re: vo purani duniya
very well written! kya kehten hain? Irshad! Irshad!
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Re: vo purani duniya
Wah! Wah! Kya Baat Hai!
Re: vo purani duniya
excellent. who has this much romance anymore
Re: vo purani duniya
Wah Wah! Kya Baat Hai!natkhat kisi billi ki aankh si ye duniya..
Re: vo purani duniya
thank you so much for your kind comments.. all of you have encouraged me write more..
thanks a lot
thanks a lot
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Karta vo rakt ka balidan hai
Ho shashakt is prakar ki ho vivash vidhi bhi aaj
Badalne par jo bhi uska vidhaan hai
Tan me rakt hai tere to man ko kyu na rangta laal
Vichaar hai mahatvakaanshi to karm kyu na ho vishaal
Tod baandh dhairya ka, tu shaurya ka chunaav kar
Jeevit ho utthhe nirjeev bhi, man par aisa ghaav kar
Rakt hi vo mulya hai jo rin rakt ka chukayega
Swabhimaan yadi priya ho, to shudra ya shatriya ho
Karta vo rakt ka balidan hai
Ho shashakt is prakar ki ho vivash vidhi bhi aaj
Badalne par jo bhi uska vidhaan hai
Tan me rakt hai tere to man ko kyu na rangta laal
Vichaar hai mahatvakaanshi to karm kyu na ho vishaal
Tod baandh dhairya ka, tu shaurya ka chunaav kar
Jeevit ho utthhe nirjeev bhi, man par aisa ghaav kar
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Re: vo purani duniya
This one is too right wing. But the earlier was a classic.
Re: vo purani duniya
D you also write in english?
Re: vo purani duniya
duniya bas duniya hai
na badaltha hai, na bigadtha
badalthe tho bas log hai
our badaltha hamara nazariya
nanhi munhi pyaari hai
pari si nazuk yeh duniya
pyaar fenko sawanr jaaya
nafrat se choor ho yeh duniya
duniya toh bas duniya hai
na badaltha, na bigadtha
na badaltha hai, na bigadtha
badalthe tho bas log hai
our badaltha hamara nazariya
nanhi munhi pyaari hai
pari si nazuk yeh duniya
pyaar fenko sawanr jaaya
nafrat se choor ho yeh duniya
duniya toh bas duniya hai
na badaltha, na bigadtha
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