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A one shot I did for Klondike Ice Cream Bars.

i think this is too literal. i like your other ads better.

Yes. I've gotten better comments when I first comp'd up the ad. After I re-art directed it to a more simple ad, I started getting less positive responses.

thanks for the feedback! keep em com'n

Phuong Le

PS: here is the old ad. I posted it up, just for kicks~

Yes. I've gotten better comments when I first comp'd up the ad. After I re-art directed it to a more simple ad, I started getting less positive responses.

thanks for the feedback! keep em com'n

Phuong Le

PS: here is the old ad. I posted it up, just for kicks~

agree with prasoon. hey where is the new image?

Oops..maybe the file was too big

this one obviously more clever.

perhaps i should stick with the old AD then?

like the old one too.

then let it be knowwwwwwwwn! I will stick with the old format. Thanks for helping me make my decision everyone.

Er... I know, I know... I'm late! But what is the white strip doing there at the bottom (in the older version)? It is all about reducing the number of elements. The strip is not adding anything to the ad. The forest picture could have been bleed.

Er... I know, I know... I'm late! But what is the white strip doing there at the bottom (in the older version)? It is all about reducing the number of elements. The strip is not adding anything to the ad. The forest picture could have been bleed.

yes. I agree. The white strip doesn't do much for the ad. I'm still working on figuring out where the logo and tagline can live. Any suggestions?

Phuong Le (LEE)