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Please give me your feedback (especially on the copy part).

copy sounds liek too much hard work. make it simpler. thats the joy.

not much creativity involved in here...copy is fine..

Saumya wrote:copy sounds liek too much hard work. make it simpler. thats the joy.

Yeah, its a very refined copy.

do u mean it's sounding too formal?

jagadeesh wrote:not much creativity involved in here...copy is fine..

Many of the hospitals ads are the same, but still I wanted to make it interesting with the copy. Tell me did you the get the message what the hospital is trying to tell? Seeing that ad, do u like to avail that service?

"Beauty and confidence 'comes' together?" It is 'come' together -- right?

antzfx wrote:"Beauty and confidence 'comes' together?" It is 'come' together -- right?

yeah! you are very right! It should be 'come'.

i do get the message, they are trying to convert people into plastic dolls..
copy might inspire them people who dig these treatments...
aren't these treatments only for women??

jagadeesh wrote:i do get the message, they are trying to convert people into plastic dolls..
copy might inspire them people who dig these treatments...
aren't these treatments only for women??

the small pictures at the bottom made you feel if these treatments are meant for only women. It is meant for both men and women I think I will take the work of putting a man image...

Thanks for remembering that Jack

antzfx wrote:"Beauty and confidence 'comes' together?" It is 'come' together -- right?

Thanks for identifying the mistake, Antzfx

@JCSaiKrishna: "I am excited to know that!"

Jagadeesh is right. If I did this, I might have given a film poster feel to this ad -- a closeup image of an attractive face with your masthead "Turn on the charm..."

antzfx wrote:@JCSaiKrishna: "I am excited to know that!"

Jagadeesh is right. If I did this, I might have given a film poster feel to this ad -- a closeup image of an attractive face with your masthead "Turn on the charm..."

I do think it is possible with this client dude!
They like only over simplified.They don't want to entertain people with creativity rather would like to pass on the message straight and effective.

I do think it is possible with this client dude!

I think you meant "I DON'T think it is possible with this client dude!"


You are true. Sometimes it is very difficult to convince them!

yeah, some clients are just impossible. They have some kind of an ego that comes between them and their work.

Thank you again Hasmukh! for understanding what I intended . I find myself with this do/dont problem...