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It takes fraction of seconds to witness our decades of technology.

"It takes you a fraction of a second to witness our decades of R&D"

I felt if you say 'old technology' it doesnt go well with consumers. just my two bits.

the thought is good. copy can be fine tuned.

Paromita wrote:"It takes you a fraction of a second to witness our decades of R&D"

I felt if you say 'old technology' it doesnt go well with consumers. just my two bits.

The word R&D does sound too technical, 'decades of technology' doesn't mean old technology, isn't it?

DesignBoyz wrote:the thought is good. copy can be fine tuned.

Thanks dude! Yeah! I think I have to the possibility to better the present copy.

decades old technology sounds like tech which was made decades ago.

decades of technology R&D sounds like we have been working on tech R&D for ages!


any consumer buying a product like a car or tyre, by logic and choice, WILL want to know about the tech details. Didnt you want to know about RAM, HDD, Motherboard specs etc for your computer? Well, thats tech stuff.

i agree with paromita. this can be sensitively reworded.

Allen Mathews wrote:i agree with paromita. this can be sensitively reworded.

Okay, I think you guys have the right point. I will change the copy line. Thank you Paromita and Allen Mathews!

so we are seeing the new version?

Hey Freaks, here is the new version with the suggested amends.
Kindly let me know if I missed any change that has to be incorporated.

"it takes you A fraction of A second"

In a fraction of second???? I don't think it's possible.

what saumya is trying to tell you is, the copy should be '...it takes you a fraction of a second' NOT '...it takes fraction of seconds...'

Ek Kanya wrote:what saumya is trying to tell you is, the copy should be '...it takes you a fraction of a second' NOT '...it takes fraction of seconds...'

Well, the meaning changes when I write 'fraction of a second', which means less than a second which is not technically possible.

'Fraction of seconds' means with in few seconds like 2.5 sec, 1.45 sec, etc. Am I right?

'fraction of a second' is a figure of speech! Hasnt anyone ever told you 'I explained it to you a million times', when that person must have explained only three times!