Welcome to critics...

[JCSaiKrishna]

Product: Match box

[yogendrarahul]

good copy work !!!

[jainpooja29]

i liked the tagline....very apt!

[JCSaiKrishna]

Thank Q Pooja! here are few more ads on HomeLites. And also changed the concept of the ads with the change in visual. Let me know your feedback.

[JCSaiKrishna]

good copy work !!!

Thank Q Rahul, I have posted few more ads on this, kindly give me your feedback.

[jainpooja29]

hey JC...you can try with the visuals but for me still the first one was the best and yes the new taglines are good again!!

[JCSaiKrishna]

Yeah sure! Thank you Pooja, Probably I'll have to try out more on the layouts and the illustration.

[DesignBoyz]

i dint get these you have the rubbing end of a matchbox and you say

"For every good beginning you will need one"

what? good rub?

[JCSaiKrishna]

i dint get these you have the rubbing end of a matchbox and you say

"For every good beginning you will need one"

what? good rub?

That sentence represents lighting the lamp/diya during the inauguration cermony or festival celebrations etc.

[Saumya]

you should try aninteresting visual.

the light from the matchstick (the flame) looks like auspicious things like a diya etc..

you can have lots of fun in that space...

[JCSaiKrishna]

you should try aninteresting visual.

the light from the matchstick (the flame) looks like auspicious things like a diya etc..

you can have lots of fun in that space...

Hmmmm, yeah, I think you are right, let me try.

[DesignBoyz]

yeah, nice idea saumya!