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What do you think?

Is this published work?
To me, some amount of work has to still go in this...

Art:
Too many styles — Headling is in all caps, subhead in a script starts with lower case. Body in yet an another font.
No logo, no branding or co-branding? Is it a poster for an internal audience.
Are we assuming people know where Blood Transfusion centres are?


Copy:
Shouldnt it be 'Blood. Source of Life' or 'Blood—source of life'
I think it should read something like 'Blood Collection Drive/ Camp'
March ka 'm' is in lower case.
'th' for the dates...
What about the timing? am/ pm?

good critique, pixelfiesta?

what does the inverted umbrella mean? blood is the umbrella of life?

I think the thought is that blood is as precious as water.
And just as we would take any means to save water, we should do the same with blood.

Am I right, Dadada?

Saumya wrote:good critique, pixelfiesta?

what does the inverted umbrella mean? blood is the umbrella of life?

Saumya, I didnt understand your question!

pixelfiesta wrote:Is this published work?
To me, some amount of work has to still go in this...

Art:
Too many styles — Headling is in all caps, subhead in a script starts with lower case. Body in yet an another font.
No logo, no branding or co-branding? Is it a poster for an internal audience.
Are we assuming people know where Blood Transfusion centres are?


Copy:
Shouldnt it be 'Blood. Source of Life' or 'Blood—source of life'
I think it should read something like 'Blood Collection Drive/ Camp'
March ka 'm' is in lower case.
'th' for the dates...
What about the timing? am/ pm?

Thanks for your comment, but it's not published work, it's a personal work, so the informations aren't completed yet, it's just to test the concept, you know this topic is too much exploited, so how do you find this new approach?

i like the way you are testing your idea on an open platform. but what is t that you are trying to say?

an umbrella saves from water? donate blood?

drops of water fill an umbrella (ocean)? similarlydrops of blood will help many?

yeah, I am having a bit of trouble comprehending this one too

pixelfiesta wrote:I think the thought is that blood is as precious as water.
And just as we would take any means to save water, we should do the same with blood.

Am I right, Dadada?

Yes you're right and the umbrella inverted does the collect effect

umbrella as collection makes sense. what doesnt is why umbrella?

its not related to saving lives and health? its not related to blood. its a random metaphor. no?

its raining blood, collect it