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abuse on woman

Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:28 pm
by greg21
(attached the picture so it doesnt crop: admin)

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:29 pm
by greg21
it says "And we say Marriages are made in heaven" the picture is clicked by me

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:42 am
by Anjana Kamat
sorry but i don't see the connect between the line and the picture. nice photo though. but the ad is a bit a for apple

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:08 am
by greg21
hi thx ill definitely work on it and find out a way to improve it but would like to know abt the "apple" thing i mean i did not get you

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:49 am
by Anjana Kamat
"A for Apple" is a phrase that means "it's obvious". in an ad i would say it means you are showing an obvious visual with a headline. say the headline says "blue car" and u show a blue car it is "A for Apple". whereas if your headline says "blue car" and you show a red car then it is not "A for Apple". it is not obvious. it makes the reader want to read your copy and see why it says blue car when it is showing a red car. the copy would then probably say that this car is blue coz it is lonely. it needs a driver. u know what i mean?

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:33 am
by greg21
yes i got it and ill keep this in mind and put my other pictures thx so much do guide me ahead also coz im just on the learning stage thx once again

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:36 pm
by basant kumar
nice stuff greg! i like it!

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:17 pm
by Madonna D'souza
nice work ...to begin with
but as a student and a lay person ....child abuse is the message that comes accross to me '
but really appreciate the effort ...!!!

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:39 am
by Ek Kanya
yes greg, where are you from? Student?

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:44 pm
by amey katkar
loookssss shabbyyy....overall an average response from my side

Re: abuse on woman

Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:57 pm
by DesignBoyz
the effort is nice greg. Anything else that you may have done?