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Some more new concepts which I developed for Rajasthan tourism. Wanted to know your reactions on the same.

Campaign 2
Topic: Rajasthan Attractions

stock photos?

what font have you used in "costume drama", "wild escapade", "rock legend"? i love the font. what is it called?

yes, stock photos!!!

love the campaign. whats the agency? you are copy or art?

if you ask me, I would reduce the brown/blue headline band in size and also teh white band for the copy. The pictures are excellent. dont need such wide bands around them.

priyanka has a point. you cold reduce the copy area. also work on the image a bit. give them some photoshop magic

Yeah, I agree with Priyanka too. The visualization needed to be a wee bit better. The concept which I had in my mind could have been visualized even better. As the creator of this ad, I really appreciate your suggestions.

so are we seeing something with changes?

I like it overall.
Good work.

Somehow the 'Rock Legends' is a great twisted line.
The other two 'Wild Escapades' and 'Costume Drama' don't quite work that much.
But overall, good work that can push the envelope further to become great work.

i really liked you detailed analysis Shantyarow! you must be a top-notch creative director!

thanks mannu. yes i used to be a (not so top notch) exec creative director till i got unemployed.
Aah, life!

nice work. whats you doing now, shanty? taking a sabbatical?

thanks shanty for your suggestions!