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hey all! this is the first time i am posting my work. this is an idea for a public safety ad. please don't go after the tacky visuals since i am not a graphic artist. i aspire to be a copywriter. all suggestions and criticisms regarding the idea are welcome.

what colour is your Tag? Sorry da, couldnt understand. please explain...

well the label here refers to the different whiskeys. blue label, gold label etc etc. sigh! i thought it was obvious. well anyone else not getting it? if that is so then i might have to change the idea.

It's not working buddy. And there has been lots of govt ads with the similar visual. Quite hackneyed I would say. Do something you haven't seen.
Best of luck.

smartsanjoo is right. this one is quiet bad.

but I am sure you can do better.

take an existing ad and make it better. or better still take a social service message (like the one you have) and work harder on it. you could also take a look at kikikikikiki's logo change thread. think ideas. have fun thinking ideas and it will all come to you...

thanks guys...will definitely try to incorporate your suggestions..keep it coming..

come on guys..need more constructive criticism and hopefully a pat on the back

frankly anirudh, you need to earn the pat !

lol yeah.. was kiddin... seriously though..i m working on this one again..

you really need to come up with something really good. this is a category where every single agecny has spent millions in terms of Patli Gali.

work hard towards DESERVING a pat on teh back...

and by the way, Happy Birthday Anirudh!