Miniral Water Label

[yogendrarahul]

thanx jainpooja & ekkanya cheers !!!

[pixelfiesta]

@yogendra: Frankly speaking I don't see enough effort in terms of designing.

The water, rays, bubbles you have used seem like a direct lift from one of the stock vectors. (I am discussing it here). I have seen this exact image in one of the stock books and also as a vector download somewhere...

Talking specifically about the design...
• I think the water image is not needed at all. One doesn't need to show what the product is, when the bottle itself is transparent.
• The font used looks dated. I think a much more modern font is needed.
• There is information overload in the center panel. You might want intersperse that big chunk of text.
• The bubbles don't mean anything when you are already showing a wave of water. It might connote a soapy solution.

I did some quick search for bottles and got these links. I love the Evian designer bottles. They are quite minimalistic.
http://www.weareprivate.net/blog/wp-con ... evian1.png
http://wwff.files.wordpress.com/2007/03 ... =460&h=338
http://bevwire.files.wordpress.com/2010 ... ottles.jpg


Do look at thedieline and lovelypackage for some packaging references.

[yogendrarahul]

@yogendra: Frankly speaking I don't see enough effort in terms of designing.

The water, rays, bubbles you have used seem like a direct lift from one of the stock vectors. (I am discussing it here). I have seen this exact image in one of the stock books and also as a vector download somewhere...

Talking specifically about the design...
• I think the water image is not needed at all. One doesn't need to show what the product is, when the bottle itself is transparent.
• The font used looks dated. I think a much more modern font is needed.
• There is information overload in the center panel. You might want intersperse that big chunk of text.
• The bubbles don't mean anything when you are already showing a wave of water. It might connote a soapy solution.

I did some quick search for bottles and got these links. I love the Evian designer bottles. They are quite minimalistic.
http://www.weareprivate.net/blog/wp-con ... evian1.png
http://wwff.files.wordpress.com/2007/03 ... =460&h=338
http://bevwire.files.wordpress.com/2010 ... ottles.jpg


Do look at thedieline and lovelypackage for some packaging references.

Hi pixefiesta : See it's a BOPP label artwork to be wrap around on miniral water (plastic) bottle which is cost about 10/12 rs (including 1000 ml miniral water) for the indian & bhutanis market.

where i can't have do work like as u shows a glass bottle or somthng elese it's will be out of the budget
that cleint will be don't except, i think u can get my point & boundation


by the way : thnx for the spent time & comment on my creatives

[yogendrarahul]

one observation: u flip images...in both artworks about it shows. Why so...

why ? there is any particular rule that you don't do that..

by the way the client is pay for it ... thx

[Saumya]

like teh packaging but I think its not edgy and contemporary enough. what do you feel? pooja? ek kanya? Yogendra?

[jainpooja29]

@saumya: if ur talking about mineral water bottle's packaging then i would say m with you but there's a point as in nothing much can be done on that front! but yes the packaging for Bell's fruit and yoghurt could have been more contemporary! but by this i do not mean that i disliked the present one!!

[Saumya]

i think there's tremendous scope to improve the print work. a whole lot of improvement is possible...

[yogendrarahul]

i think there's tremendous scope to improve the print work. a whole lot of improvement is possible...

keep it in my mind next time thnx !!!

[justin_ruch1180]

I like it!:D

[Saumya]

but lets see more work from you, yogendra!

[Paromita]

yes yogendra! keep sending the good work!

[JCSaiKrishna]

a youghurt pack top lid artwork done for a delhi based cleint.

I liked the yellowish tone, feeling yummy

[Paromita]

a youghurt pack top lid artwork done for a delhi based cleint.

I liked the yellowish tone, feeling yummy

what yellowish tone?

[JCSaiKrishna]

a youghurt pack top lid artwork done for a delhi based cleint.

I liked the yellowish tone, feeling yummy

what yellowish tone?

The visual tone!

[Paromita]

ahhh.. you liked the mango yellow colour in the fruits and yoghurt packaging? yeah its kind of nice.