Karele ki Sabzi

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pixelfiesta
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Re: Karele ki Sabzi

Post by pixelfiesta »

A good concept can only become great when supported by good art and good copy!
Even if one of them is on the lower side, your output will suffer!

These are the minor details but matter a lot. Putting things randomly doesn't work always

Another thing..
We Indians are by and large a loud community. You see when it comes to talking to each other, festivals, make-up, etc, etc... you will see that anything discreet or subtle doesn't work most of the times.
Hence I am not sure if this clean look is actually adding to it.

I would rather visualise it as a dinning table kind of setting, with Indian cutlery, pickle bottles in the background, etc... I think a little chaotic setting is OK.
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raja ghose
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Re: Karele ki Sabzi

Post by raja ghose »

i second, third and fourth that
Remembering Raja Ram Mohan Roy
cooldepp
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Re: Karele ki Sabzi

Post by cooldepp »

thank u guys
u have opened my eyes hehe... :)
but seriously... thanks for giving me an entirely different perspective.
it's good to post your work here and get a second, third.... and so opinion about ur work

i know the idea here is lacking in details
but actually the thing is that i don't have any art guy to support my idea.
so i had just put in an idea across with the help of little photoshop that i know
but thanks you guys for giving useful feedbacks
whatever u said definately makes sense.
I'll try to incorporate these suggestions.
:)
I am not a writer. Just a copywriter.
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raja ghose
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Re: Karele ki Sabzi

Post by raja ghose »

way to go then!
Remembering Raja Ram Mohan Roy
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