Klondike Ice Cream

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:41 am

A one shot I did for Klondike Ice Cream Bars.

Prasoon · Post by **Prasoon** » Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:34 pm

i think this is too literal. i like your other ads better.

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Wed Sep 20, 2006 1:09 pm

Yes. I've gotten better comments when I first comp'd up the ad. After I re-art directed it to a more simple ad, I started getting less positive responses.

thanks for the feedback! keep em com'n

Phuong Le

PS: here is the old ad. I posted it up, just for kicks~

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Wed Sep 20, 2006 1:11 pm

Yes. I've gotten better comments when I first comp'd up the ad. After I re-art directed it to a more simple ad, I started getting less positive responses.

thanks for the feedback! keep em com'n

Phuong Le

PS: here is the old ad. I posted it up, just for kicks~

MissMallu · Post by **MissMallu** » Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:55 pm

agree with prasoon. hey where is the new image?

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:40 am

Oops..maybe the file was too big

Desh Premi · Post by **Desh Premi** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 2:58 pm

this one obviously more clever.

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:43 am

perhaps i should stick with the old AD then?

Priyanka · Post by **Priyanka** » Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:08 pm

like the old one too.

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 2:35 am

then let it be knowwwwwwwwn! I will stick with the old format. Thanks for helping me make my decision everyone.

advertisingh · Post by **advertisingh** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:53 pm

Er... I know, I know... I'm late! But what is the white strip doing there at the bottom (in the older version)? It is all about reducing the number of elements. The strip is not adding anything to the ad. The forest picture could have been bleed.

advertisingh · Post by **advertisingh** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:53 pm

Er... I know, I know... I'm late! But what is the white strip doing there at the bottom (in the older version)? It is all about reducing the number of elements. The strip is not adding anything to the ad. The forest picture could have been bleed.

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:14 am

yes. I agree. The white strip doesn't do much for the ad. I'm still working on figuring out where the logo and tagline can live. Any suggestions?

Phuong Le (LEE)

desicreative.com

Klondike Ice Cream

Klondike Ice Cream

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