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well yeah, i am a budding copywriter....not been around too long... dude... I didn't get the sorry part of it, seriously... thats actually what i was looking for... so now i have to know that i have to make the ad a little more emotional so as to make people feel worse, make the surprise a little ...

Hey people, thanks for your comments. Glad some of you liked it. Any critics? thats what would help... guess you all know what i mean

Hey people .... check out this ad... do let me know how you like it and let me know if there is something more i should do with it.... and moreover please screw it.....

Thanks
In good spirits
Akash Shandilya

Hello people.... thanks for your comments and critics.... appreciate it.... seriously!

anyway.... reworked the ad a bit... its still verbose... but there is a reason for that.... its for my portfolio.... and i wanted to show that i could write long copy!!!


anyway..... check it out... and screw ...

Dude.... i really dont get it ... mabye i need glasses or something ... but people next to me seeing this ad... didnt get it either.... so a simple question.... which side of each of the images move... i mean what ???i really dont get the ad... are you comparing it to the actual objects or to other ...

What the F#$^ :shock: .... are you insane.... alright check this out.. i think the objective of your ad should be to convince mothers that they should buy this baby food for their children... right .... uhhhhhh .... where the hell is that ???? i mean i know what your trying to say .... that children ...

Guys can i please have your comments on this ad i made for CRY.

Guys can i please have your comments on this ad i made for CRY

Bhai... kaisa hai... ok my review.... since you didnt show this in the lab.... or mabye i ignored... :D


the idea a 9, the copy good as well... but ... so you wonder .... but? what the F*** do you mean but .... aree mere baap ... bolne de ne.... but i think you should add a bit of a story to it ...

hey arjun ... thanks for the tip man ... the only post i considered ....

take care....

absolute BAKWAAS... have you lost it... is that all youve learnt from me my child...

Hey guys could you please comment on this anti-smoking ad
thanks
Akash
(MICA)

Guys could you plese leave your comments on this anti-smoking ad...
thanks
Akash
(MICA)

nice work